Would anyone be willing to check Nico's History for errors?
Mar 26, 2017 18:59:30 GMT -5
Post by Deleted on Mar 26, 2017 18:59:30 GMT -5
So, a preview of it to hook you:
When they got to Rosemay’s den, Kiki was set apon first. A moss soaked in something that would help with healing and infection. Then she set to work on Nico. “I’m going to be seeing this poor boy a lot.” Rosemary muttered, her golden brown coat already stained with blood from Kiki’s wound.
Nico’s blood had already clotted, Rosemary took this as a good sign. She had used a clotting agent on him before encase he was hemophiliac`, but thankfully they would not need it. Kiki was glad too, he was in less danger of bleeding out. Though Rosemary seemed worried about Nico’s blood loss anyways. She said that there was just so much blood on the outside that she was worried about what was going on in the inside.
When she said that Kiki was terrified. He could be bleeding on the inside? Oh, he was a dead wolf for sure!
A few hours later, Nico stirred.
He clutched his paws closer to his body, he was freezing despite being right next to a warm fire. Rosemary had warned of that, the blood loss was severe.
His legs were in splints, and he was laying in a way that put as little pressure as possible on his broken shoulder. Rosemary was saying it would take months for him to heal. He would most likely see his second birthday with orders to stay still.
This is from the second part of Nico's life, for his full story click this link: docs.google.com/document/d/1oCzbN6CJCBJJMobKYidD_Y1YqyKLuadFdlb5YTBXJEg/edit?usp=sharing
When they got to Rosemay’s den, Kiki was set apon first. A moss soaked in something that would help with healing and infection. Then she set to work on Nico. “I’m going to be seeing this poor boy a lot.” Rosemary muttered, her golden brown coat already stained with blood from Kiki’s wound.
Nico’s blood had already clotted, Rosemary took this as a good sign. She had used a clotting agent on him before encase he was hemophiliac`, but thankfully they would not need it. Kiki was glad too, he was in less danger of bleeding out. Though Rosemary seemed worried about Nico’s blood loss anyways. She said that there was just so much blood on the outside that she was worried about what was going on in the inside.
When she said that Kiki was terrified. He could be bleeding on the inside? Oh, he was a dead wolf for sure!
A few hours later, Nico stirred.
He clutched his paws closer to his body, he was freezing despite being right next to a warm fire. Rosemary had warned of that, the blood loss was severe.
His legs were in splints, and he was laying in a way that put as little pressure as possible on his broken shoulder. Rosemary was saying it would take months for him to heal. He would most likely see his second birthday with orders to stay still.
This is from the second part of Nico's life, for his full story click this link: docs.google.com/document/d/1oCzbN6CJCBJJMobKYidD_Y1YqyKLuadFdlb5YTBXJEg/edit?usp=sharing
